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 \begin{abstract}
 We present a detailed strategy for the observation of Gamma Ray Bursts (GRBs) for the first
-half year of 2005.
+half year of 2005. Because of similarities, H-ray flashes (XRFs) and Soft Gamma Repeaters (SGR)
+are also included in our proposal.
 All observations will be mainly triggered by alerts from \sw.
 In addition, the \he and \ig satellites can contribute a small number of alerts.
@@ -79,12 +80,10 @@
 duty cycle. The overlap in sky converages between \sw and \ma seems to be favorable for \ma.
 As it is still unknown how many alerts \sw will deliver exactly, and how its sky coverage matches
-with the one of \ma,
-we cannot predict the alert frequency now to better than 100\% uncertainty.
-This leads to an expected observation time
-of 5$\pm$5 hours per month. This number includes observation during the moon-time.
+with the one of \ma, we cannot predict the alert frequency now to better than 100\% uncertainty.
+This leads to an expected observation time of 5$\pm$5 hours per month.
+This number includes observation during the moon-time.
 We give a detailed description of the observation procedures in La Palma and
-propose to spend one dedicated night to test the automatic alert procedure
-with the subsystem experts.
-We suggest to review the situation in half a year from now.
+propose to spend few dedicated nights to test the automatic alert procedure
+with the subsystem experts. We suggest to review the situation in half a year from now.
 \end{abstract}
 
@@ -116,5 +115,5 @@
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@@ -130,9 +129,9 @@
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+\bibitem{TOTANI} Very strong TeV emission as Gamma-Ray Bursts Afterglows,
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+\bibitem{BOETTCHER} High-energy Gamma-Rays from Ultra-high-energy Protons in Gamma-Ray Bursts,
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@@ -147,5 +146,5 @@
 Pe'er A., Waxman E., ApJ, 603, 448, 2004.
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-Hurley K. et al., Nature, 372, 652
+Hurley K. et al., Nature, 372, 652.
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 Dingus B.L., AIP Conference Proceedings, 662, 240, 2003.
@@ -170,10 +169,10 @@
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-\bibitem{BARRAUD} Barraud C. et al, A\&A, 400, 1021 (2003)
-\bibitem{LEVAN} Levan A. et al, astro-ph/0410560 (2004)
-\bibitem{FARGION} Fargion D. astro-ph/0011403 (2000)
-\bibitem{GCN3002} GCN GRB OBSERVATION REPORT, 3002 (2005)
+\bibitem{DADO} Dado S. et al, A\&A, 422, 381, 2004
+\bibitem{HUANG} Huang Y.F., Dai Z. G., Lu T., MNRAS, 332, 735, 2002.
+\bibitem{BARRAUD} Barraud C. et al, A\&A, 400, 1021, 2003.
+\bibitem{LEVAN} Levan A. et al, astro-ph/0410560, 2004.
+\bibitem{FARGION} Fargion D. astro-ph/0011403, 2000.
+\bibitem{GCN3002} GCN GRB OBSERVATION REPORT, 3002, 2005
 
 %References used in chapter 2: Burst Alert System