Index: trunk/MagicSoft/TDAS-Extractor/Pedestal.tex
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--- trunk/MagicSoft/TDAS-Extractor/Pedestal.tex	(revision 6664)
+++ trunk/MagicSoft/TDAS-Extractor/Pedestal.tex	(revision 6665)
@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@
 can be completely described by the noise-autocorrelation matrix $\boldsymbol{B}$ 
 (eq.~\ref{eq:autocorr}), 
-where the square root of the diagonal elements give what is usually denoted as the ``Pedestal RMS''. 
+where the square root of the diagonal elements give what is usually denoted as the ``pedestal RMS''. 
 \par
 
@@ -18,17 +18,20 @@
 
 \begin{equation}
-\frac{Var[Q]}{<Q>^2} = \frac{1}{<n_{phe}>} * F^2
+\frac{Var[Q]}{<Q>^2} = \frac{1}{<n_{\mathrm{phe}}>} * F^2
 \end{equation}
 
-Here, $Q$ is the signal fluctuation due to the number of signal photo-electrons
-(equiv. to the signal $S$), and $Var[Q]$ the fluctuations of the true signal $Q$ 
+Here, $Q$ is the signal due to a number $n_{\mathrm{phe}}$ of signal photo-electrons
+(equiv. to the signal $S$) after subtraction of the pedestal. $Var[Q]$ is the fluctuation of the true signal $Q$ 
 due to the Poisson fluctuations of the number of photo-electrons. Because of: 
 
 \begin{eqnarray}
 \widehat{Q} &=& Q + X \\
-Var(\widehat{Q}) &=& Var(Q) + Var(X) \\
-Var(Q) &=& Var(\widehat{Q}) - Var(X)
+Var[\widehat{Q}] &=& Var[Q] + Var[X] \\
+Var[Q]           &=& Var[\widehat{Q}] - Var[X]
 \end{eqnarray}
 
+Here, $Var[X]$ is the fluctuation due to the signal extraction, mainly as a result of the background fluctuations and 
+the numerical precision of the extraction algorithm.
+\par
 Only in the case that the intrinsic extractor resolution $R$ at fixed background $BG$ does not depend on the signal 
 intensity\footnote{Theoretically, this is the case for the digital filter, eq.~\ref{eq:of_noise}.}, 
@@ -36,5 +39,5 @@
 
 \begin{eqnarray}
-Var(Q) &\approx& Var(\widehat{Q}) - Var(\widehat{Q})\,\vline_{\,Q=0}
+Var[Q] &\approx& Var[\widehat{Q}] - Var[\widehat{Q}]\,\vline_{\,Q=0}
 \label{eq:rmssubtraction}
 \end{eqnarray}
@@ -57,6 +60,5 @@
 %where $c$ is the photon/ADC conversion factor  $<Q>/<m_{pe}>$.}
 
- One can then retrieve $R$ 
-by applying the signal extractor to a {\textit{\bf fixed window}} of pedestal events, where the 
+ One can determine $R$ by applying the signal extractor with a {\textit{\bf fixed window}} to pedestal events, where the 
 bias vanishes and measure $Var(\widehat{Q})\,\vline_{\,Q=0}$.
 
@@ -70,17 +72,16 @@
 signal amplitude $S$ and dependent only on the background $BG$ (eq.~\ref{eq:of_noise}).
 %It can then be obtained from the calculation of the variance $Var[\widehat{Q}]$ 
-%by applying the extractor to a fixed window of pure background events (``pedestal events'') 
-%and get rid of the bias in that way. 
-\par
-
-In order to calculate the bias and Mean-squared error, we proceed in the following ways:
+%by applying the extractor with a fixed window to pure background events (``pedestal events''). 
+\par
+
+In order to calculate the statistical parameters, we proceed in the following ways:
 \begin{enumerate}
 \item Determine $R$ by applying the signal extractor to a fixed window
     of pedestal events. The background fluctuations can be simulated with different 
     levels of night sky background and the continuous light source, but no signal size 
-    dependency can be retrieved with this method. 
+    dependence can be retrieved by this method. 
 \item Determine $B$ and $MSE$ from MC events with added noise. 
 %    Assuming that $MSE$ and $B$ are negligible for the events without noise, one can 
-	With this method, one can get a dependency of both values from the size of the signal, 
+	With this method, one can get a dependence of both values on the size of the signal, 
 	although the MC might contain systematic differences with respect to the real data.
 \item Determine $MSE$ from the error retrieved from the fit results of $\widehat{S}$, which is possible for the 
@@ -102,5 +103,5 @@
 Difference in mean pedestal (per FADC slice) between extraction algorithm
 applied on a fixed window of 1 FADC slice (``extractor random'') and a simple addition of 
-2 FADC slices (``fundamental''). On the left, a run with closed camera has been taken, in the center
+2 fixed FADC slices (``fundamental''). On the left, a run with closed camera has been taken, in the center
  an opened camera observing an extra-galactic star field and on the right, an open camera being 
 illuminated by the continuous light of the calibration (level: 100). Every entry corresponds to one 
@@ -119,5 +120,5 @@
 Difference in mean pedestal (per FADC slice) between extraction algorithm
 applied on a fixed window of 2 FADC slices (``extractor random'') and a simple addition of 
-2 FADC slices (``fundamental''). On the left, a run with closed camera has been taken, in the center
+2 FADC fixed slices (``fundamental''). On the left, a run with closed camera has been taken, in the center
  an opened camera observing an extra-galactic star field and on the right, an open camera being 
 illuminated by the continuous light of the calibration (level: 100). Every entry corresponds to one 
@@ -138,5 +139,5 @@
 applied on a fixed window of 6 FADC slices and time-randomized weights (``extractor random'') 
 and a simple addition of 
-6 FADC slices (``fundamental''). On the left, a run with closed camera has been taken, in the center
+6 FADC fixed slices (``fundamental''). On the left, a run with closed camera has been taken, in the center
  an opened camera observing an extra-galactic star field and on the right, an open camera being 
 illuminated by the continuous light of the calibration (level: 100). Every entry corresponds to one 
@@ -150,5 +151,5 @@
 of Pedestal Events}
 
-By applying the signal extractor to a fixed window of pedestal events, we 
+By applying the signal extractor with a fixed window to pedestal events, we 
 determine the parameter $R$ for the case of no signal ($Q = 0$)\footnote{%
 In the case of 
@@ -264,5 +265,5 @@
 of Pedestal Events}
 
-By applying the signal extractor to a global extraction window of pedestal events, allowing 
+By applying the signal extractor with a global extraction window to pedestal events, allowing 
 it to ``slide'' and maximize the encountered signal, we 
 determine the bias $B$ and the mean-squared error $MSE$ for the case of no signal ($S=0$). 
@@ -288,7 +289,7 @@
 at 4 slices. The global winners is extractor~\#29 
 (digital filter with integration of 4 slices). All sliding window extractors -- except \#21 -- 
-have a smaller mean-square error than the resolution of the fixed window reference extractor. This means 
+have a smaller mean-square error than the resolution of the fixed window reference extractor (row\ 1,\#4). This means 
 that the global error of the sliding window extractors is smaller than the one of the fixed window extractors
-even if the first have a bias.
+with 8~FADC slices even if the first have a bias.
 \par
 The important information for the image cleaning is the number of photo-electrons above which the probability for obtaining 
@@ -314,5 +315,5 @@
 \hline
 \hline
-\multicolumn{16}{|c|}{Statistical Parameters for $S=0$} \\
+\multicolumn{16}{|c|}{Statistical Parameters for $S=0$ units in $N_{\mathrm{phe}}$} \\
 \hline
 \hline
@@ -344,9 +345,10 @@
 \end{tabular}
 \vspace{1cm}
-\caption{The statistical parameters bias, resolution and mean error for the sliding window 
-algorithm. The first line displays the resolution of the smallest existing robust fixed--window extractor 
+\caption{The statistical parameters bias, resolution and mean error for the algorithms which can be applied to sliding 
+windows (SW) and/or fixed windows (FW) of pedestal events. 
+The first line displays the resolution of the smallest existing robust fixed--window extractor 
 for reference. All units in equiv. 
 photo-electrons, uncertainty: 0.1 phes. All extractors were allowed to move 5 FADC slices plus 
-their window size. The ``winners'' for each row are marked in red. Global winners (within the given 
+their window size. The ``winners'' for each column are marked in red. Global winners (within the given 
 uncertainty) are the extractors Nr. \#24 (MExtractTimeAndChargeSpline with an integration window of 
 1 FADC slice) and Nr.\#29 
@@ -567,5 +569,5 @@
 \end{figure}
 
-Figure~\ref{fig:df:convfit} shows the obtained ``conversion factors'' and ``F-Factor'' computed as: 
+Figure~\ref{fig:df:convfit} shows the obtained ``conversion factors'' and ``F-Factor'' computed as~\cite{MAGIC-calibration}:
 
 \begin{eqnarray}
